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wyatt1048Finally, it is done!
Erm. for some reason, the settings on my scanner have changed themselves, so everything is slightly washed out.
Mess Sergeant Gardner there, along with a corpse. I'm not sure how they ripped the tables off the stand, but obviously the legs aren't made as strongly as the top. Also that shotgun she's been fondling finally gets used.
Why is the A.I. core behind the med bay, Bioware?
The explosion in the bottom left panel should be much brighter and more obvious. This room shows of the big problem with just messing about with pencils: it's black with computer lights, so it can never look like it should in just blue pencils.
EDI is an interesting character; I think we didn't get enough time with her in the game. Apparently all the excitement and watching his friends die has had a bad effect on Gardner's health.
Yeah, this is the page where I had no idea how to fill the space. I was rushing a bit by this stage.
Jacob isn't very happy. Not surprising. I think that at this point, it's amazing anyone is willing to stay on the ship, and Joker's not helping.
Finished! Thirty (sketched) pages in thirty days!
The reason I've left this as an obvious 'Next time on..' is because I wanted to give the impression that the game could continue from this point, even though it would be a harder game. I'd've loved to have the option to turn down Cerberus' plans, but that simply wasn't offered - a crime in a game that's supposed to be about the decisions you make having influence. Getting railroaded at the start in that way - working for the bad guys, and the worst you can say is 'I'll do it, but I won't like it!' annoyed me. If there had been just some hint of say, Anderson asking you to be a double agent, it would have made me feel so much better.
Although I suppose what TIM suggests earlier in the comic, slowly convincing the crew to follow her over Cerberus, would count as that, but it's never stated. The main plot was just one big irritation.
Not only that, but also:
Ponified versions of the characters! Everything's better with ponies!
Joker made me wibble a bit; I was drawing the support/crutches when I realised that he should be a pegasus: he had to fly, even if he has Vrolik's syndorme.
Erm. for some reason, the settings on my scanner have changed themselves, so everything is slightly washed out.
Mess Sergeant Gardner there, along with a corpse. I'm not sure how they ripped the tables off the stand, but obviously the legs aren't made as strongly as the top. Also that shotgun she's been fondling finally gets used.
Why is the A.I. core behind the med bay, Bioware?
The explosion in the bottom left panel should be much brighter and more obvious. This room shows of the big problem with just messing about with pencils: it's black with computer lights, so it can never look like it should in just blue pencils.
EDI is an interesting character; I think we didn't get enough time with her in the game. Apparently all the excitement and watching his friends die has had a bad effect on Gardner's health.
Yeah, this is the page where I had no idea how to fill the space. I was rushing a bit by this stage.
Jacob isn't very happy. Not surprising. I think that at this point, it's amazing anyone is willing to stay on the ship, and Joker's not helping.
Finished! Thirty (sketched) pages in thirty days!
The reason I've left this as an obvious 'Next time on..' is because I wanted to give the impression that the game could continue from this point, even though it would be a harder game. I'd've loved to have the option to turn down Cerberus' plans, but that simply wasn't offered - a crime in a game that's supposed to be about the decisions you make having influence. Getting railroaded at the start in that way - working for the bad guys, and the worst you can say is 'I'll do it, but I won't like it!' annoyed me. If there had been just some hint of say, Anderson asking you to be a double agent, it would have made me feel so much better.
Although I suppose what TIM suggests earlier in the comic, slowly convincing the crew to follow her over Cerberus, would count as that, but it's never stated. The main plot was just one big irritation.
Not only that, but also:
Ponified versions of the characters! Everything's better with ponies!
Joker made me wibble a bit; I was drawing the support/crutches when I realised that he should be a pegasus: he had to fly, even if he has Vrolik's syndorme.
